Quibble

An adventure, a love story, a dystopian warning, and a meditation on transhumanism, Quibble asks what a technological singularity will mean for humanity’s survival — and exactly what might survive.

The novel uses first-person limited point-of-view. To clarify a chapter’s speaker, their name is given following the @ symbol after the chapter title. A few chapters use third-person limited point-of-view.

Occasionally, short poetic and prose interludes interrupt the story to offer clarification about the novel’s world.

Back matter

Helpful back matter for the novel includes:

  • Glossary: a compendium of the story’s specialized terms with their definitions

  • Appendix: an explanation of the calendar Without, used by Dazed and Adroit

  • Bibliography: a list of sources which inspired or informed the author

Links to the back matter also appear on the Singular Dream homepage.

Part 1: if then

Chapters 1 & 2: Birth & Dream

Quibble recalls her birth and her first lesson in the fearful life of a One.

Chapter 3: Unity

Quibble's foster mother, Vega, teaches her about keeping secrets.

Chapters 4 & 5: One & Fear

Quibble sees shadows Within – a sign she may be insane – and learns something even more surprising about a Zero.

Chapter 6: Without

Quibble makes a shocking journey and finds joy at the end, then sorrow.

Part 2: gosub

Chapter 7: Quill

Arriving in a surreal, frightening place, Quibble befriends Definition, a woman running from her past.

Chapter 8: Edict

Nish has a murderous daydream. Realizing Quibble is in danger, Cate hatches a plan.

Chapters 9 & 10: Definition & Glass

Quibble breaks things and learns how One can be hurt Without.

Chapter 11: Adroitness

Introducing Quibble to a forbidden mystery brings Nish face-to-face with her past — and grief she has long denied.

Chapter 12: Control

The lord Lesath tests his adept Asuja as they plot against Quibble and Vega.

Part 3: for to

Chapter 13: Faith

Abducting Quibble, the Zero Alnasl tempts her to break her promise to Nish.

Chapters 14 & 15: Summary & Orb

Caught in a fateful, frightening dream, Quibble almost dies.

Chapter 16: Amber

An orb bursts, and two factions of alarmed Zeros face off. Quibble and Alnasl set out to get answers.

Chapter 17: Journey

Traversing ancient ruins, Quibble and Alnasl are attacked by Far warriors.

Part 4: def fn

Chapter 18: Egg

On the giant Egg, a space station, Quibble sees both humanity's genius and its penchant for self-destruction.

Chapter 19: Utopia

Quibble enters the Egg's hub and sees the enigmatic AI Utopia face to face.

Chapter 20: Heretic

Honoring Exclamation's request to go Without, Meissa seals her own fate.

Chapters 21 & 22: Blue & Grasshopper

Yed's cruelty forces Meissa to make a heartbreaking choice, and Utopia posits a paradox broke her orb.

Part 5: read

Chapter 23: Touch

Quibble lets herself be drawn into a kind dream — with terrifying consequences for Alnasl. The doctor Gienah explains how Ones become Dazed.

Chapters 24 & 25: Script & Song

As Quibble returns to the monastery, old bonds are shattered and a new one forms.

Chapter 26: Road

Quibble learns the fate of Citation, an excelsior Vega fostered, and gets a stern warning from Rasalased.

Chapter 27: Consensus

Among the bustling Adroit, Quibble learns the disturbing truth about Citation's death. Unity brings her a nightmare.

Part 6: while wend

Chapter 28: Burden

Faced with the Adroit's hostility, Quibble makes an unlikely friend — an outcast Far.

Chapter 29: Mirror

Bringing gifts, Vega gets a chilly reception as Quibble drives a hard bargain.

Chapter 30: Spy

Asuja plots to win his freedom, but it has a price — Quibble’s death.

Chapter 31: Lesson

Alnasl gives Quibble a hard lesson in the use and danger of a Zero's glass.

Upcoming chapters

Chapter 32: Kindness

Growing tensions lead Quibble and Definition to bitter choices.

Chapter 33: Phantom

A phantom Zero with uncanny powers chases Quibble.

Chapters 34 & 35: Indication & Pop

Quibble learns the gruesome truth about how Zeros fight.